A Link To Childhood Trauma Im afraid to say that i did no enjoy this animation.
The shouting went on for a little too much in a way that you had to wait for stuff to happen, the lipsyncing was a bit off in alot of cases and the animation seemed a bit half finished. also a few cases had the music and voices making it difficult to understand.
The general idea was funny but stretched for a bit too long, very little things where happening.
Fear not tho, even tho i might be harsh i can see you got fine potential to become great at animating and i can say that you should totaly keep working on them.